JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Composer]

change

Interesting story. It begs the question of how the character changes by the end of the story. He reaches out by confronting the next door neighbor, but not too much change. Good movie though!

[Oh My God - Pilot]

stuff below here...

What an interesting pilot to a series. I noticed that when he was in the office at the beginning, his eyes changed from a black dot pupal to a blue eye pupal. You removed the right menu from flash, I couldn't zoom in on the stop sign to read it :(. Great fluid animation, and the voice acting was good too. The story was decent. Thank you for making it you guys.

Xenon responds:

Stop sign =

STOP
Or I'll fucking eat you.

[I like you]

orange twist

After seeing Boy Machine, and then this, I figured you have an excellent sense of mixing the right kind of music with the right time in the movie. The story has an interesting twist at the end. Can't believe this is scored so low. I mean, what the fuck NG viewers!

[Boy Machine]

cool piece

Nice project you got. Good use of red background when he was getting angry, and the close ups. The music started to pick up as the man was getting even more frustrated, so that's cool too. I don't think I can come up with anything to improve on it. Congrats on frontpage man!

[The Number 5]

a gem

Nice little story! I think it could benefit from a re-recording of the dialogue to make it better. If you didn't want to do that, maybe include an ambient track to fade that hiss that comes with the vocals. This piece doesn't need too much "presentation" that was mentioned before my review. It works well, but could use some music to move the story along. The story is light, so some upbeat music might help. The NG score should really be higher on this, sometimes I have no idea about these voters. :)

[@t]

congrats on @t

I enjoyed watching it! I found it very amusing. I don't think I've seen your other work, but I know that telling a story without dialogue can be very difficult, so congratulations on its success!

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

Wow.
Thank you!

[Rise of the MK: Part 4]

good, not great, here is why...

It doesn't work outside of the series because the Luigi sad memory thing comes out of nowhere real quick (I laughed) and it tries to milk the viewer's emotion for no reason at all, outside of the series. I will always question what graphics were actually stolen and what was created, since it's not very original in the visual sense.

The story was about Mario trying to defeat Wart, but he can't do it alone. Wart proves that Mario is weaker when Luigi has to save Mario and they BOTH have to beat Wart. Mario isn't exactly a super hero, but more co-hero to this saga. Though the ending was long for this piece alone, I don't think it was as glorious and unified to close the series. Overall, this movie is good (worth 1 or maybe 2 viewings), nothing great.

[Wack Daddy Mario 2]

same old thing.

Confusing. I didn't understand it. Maybe the point is made in the song, instead of the cartoon? How many times can mario sing and dance? I voted a 5 for graphics because the first half was stolen. It's better than a solem, but not by much. There's plenty of room for improvement!

[Roof Tiling]

hilarious tale of a man gone crazy

This cartoon is hilarious! It started out kind of eerie, but then the guy started going crazy and it got really funny. The older lady was ironing nothing, how elderly of her.

[Awkward Nature]

Amazing!

Really good cartoon. It's a pretty basic set up with 2 characters that want the same thing, but you made it really funny with the squirrel sounds and the trap. You should send this out to some festivals, it might win something. Thanks for making it, I enjoyed watching it.