JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Born in the 80's]

I'm sending out an SOS

I only laughed at the sheep as a pillow part. But it was slightly enjoyable. I guess I just wanted more from it, like a story or something to link it all together. The audio breaks were okay because it felt like flipping through a radio station in the 80s, which is fine. Way too long of a shot at the beginning (the first guy singing), break it up man! Get a closer shot when he jumps on the bed. It might be more sentimental if you visually include more crap that the 80s produced.

[Email!!]

...

Hated it. It's like ADD on ADD. Your comic book feel was cool though, I liked that. Some of the voices were hard to understand, might be a sound mix problem, or the dialogue is just to fucking fast. Yay!

[Stop Cryin Your Heart Out]

nothing happens!

It's a portfolio piece, I can choose what type of animation/drawing I like and call on that author for hire.

More animators does not mean it will be awesome. It was missing something. It was too predictable, one singer after another, when a character did something slightly different, it started to get interesting, but nothing built off of that.

It needed backgrounds to keep it interesting and to separate the characters in a specific location, unless you wanted all of them in a blank space to create meaning on NG, that all characters we create end up together in a blank space, some sort of unity?

[Fat Cat (Rave Cat)]

what a super cat!

HAHA! I didn't expect that. I thought the cat was going to save the day in an entirely different way. That was hilarious. Good job. You managed to squeeze a lot out of 267.9kb.

[Mask]

the message

I'm trying to understand who the enemy is, and I'm trying to understand the message of the story (this is what I got): When you're wearing a mask, the conflict is within yourself. Or...The only way to overcome your problem is to be yourself (he takes the mask off and flies high after his doppleganger). Or..Pay no attention to your dreams, they are just dreams. Help me out! It's got to deal with the mask, that's the title.

Sweet animation, Good luck at the festival!

[Spider-Man Animated Short]

worth watching!

Spiderman wins by camping out. Not my favorite way for a superhero to survive, but he did what was needed at the time. How will he get that pesky Goblin now? The Animation was fine, I was more into the story! Great music choice too!

[Bones]

wicked fun!

Awesome cartoon, thanks for making it! I enjoyed watching it. I don't think we needed to keep seeing the dynamite in the bone, maybe just twice, once with the male dog, and once with the female dog (maybe not even twice). Awesome delayed expresson on the male dog!

Not really much room for low scores on this review. If there was an editing option, I would give you a 9, not a 10, due to the comments I left.

[master of the universe]

cool message

Cool message, interesting graphics. I liked it, BUT it needs a little touch up on graphics. The sound gets a little too loud near the last half, watch your sound levels. I liked the cap he was wearing. Maybe you should import more graphics, rather than draw them in flash (just an idea). I voted 3 on it, but not much help: You gave this entry a 3, raising its score from 1.9037 to 1.9102!

[Escapism.]

train to needle

Cool music video! I especially liked the train to needle comparison. Great use of sound syncing when he beats his head on the bars.

[Sonic: Bad Bubbles (VGDC)]

too short.

The intro was longer than the actual cartoon. Excluding the intro and the whole cartoon, I thought it was great!