JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Real Legend 2]

needs better dialogue recording.

The dialogue was difficult to understand, so I was relying on the subtitles that were included. Overall it was kind of boring, but I enjoyed the visuals. If it had excellent dialogue, and was a little bit quicker with pace, I would like it a whole lot more!

[The unlucky raven]

you got an awesome cartoon

I really enjoyed your cartoon. It was funny and entertaining to sit through. The animation was fine, don't change a thing about it! I was wondering about your title though. Maybe the raven is unlucky because he has to see these events happen.

[A New Dr. Pepper]

yes! the drink that invented ulcers!

I felt the same way when I saw that Dr Pepper commercial. Nice canadian dude! You might want to fade in/out each vocal track because there is a blip sound at the end of each line. COOL CAN!

KupaMan responds:

Thanks for reviewing. The deal with the sound is, even if I fade out on the end, it still makes a blip sound. I've been trying to fix it, but nothing really works. Oh well.

[Cubicle Slave: Part One]

music and colors

I had that job once. I left it and never looked back! Some people just can't handle pleasing 500 other people a week, it's too much talking and too much work! The music and the colorlessness of the his world was very fitting.

[3 3ast 3 3urious]

cool bit

I think the sound mix could have been better. I could barely hear the voice-over at the end. Your point was carried over well. The real question is, What can't those cars do! Cool bit.

[ACC - Around The World]

Dynamite Spokompton

That is so Napolean Dynamite inspired, or is it? What would be great would be the ability to change camera views DURING the dance! That would rock! I need to figure out this flash mx thing now. It does video!

[Schiavo's Secret]

pretty funny considering the situation

I don't think it's tasteless because you could fly either way with this cartoon. Clever merge between reality and tv. Graphics could be a tad bit better, but it was rushed, as was my "the unlucky ant" cartoon. Amusing use of sound. Good job! RIP Schiavo.

[Mr. T Vs Superman Part 3]

Helluva fun adventure!

Sweet! It was a sweet adventure! The way Mr. T handles thoughs monsters is helluva good job! It needs more sounds and voices!

["Target Practice"]

self-reflective, but still needed work.

A self-reflective cartoon! This cartoons goes to show that some people have meaning in what they express. I'm sure a few English papers will be discussing warning signs of expressive artwork. As for the cartoon, it needed more sounds, some of the editing was nice, maybe some more colors besides blood-red!

Better luck next time. Oh!

[MrT Vs Superman 3 Trailor]

wildfire and..uh..voices

Mr. T vs. Everything! I remember back in the day when internet was new, the Mr T comics were coming out like wildfire all over the web! Thanks for pushing it into the flash format. I'll look on friday for it! I hope it has voice actors...