JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Koopa's Collapse]

kinda funny

I thought it was kind of funny. The main thing you should work on, in your ongoing flash work, is keeping it interesting. I've got a problem with that too. I love to make shit, but sometimes that gets ahead of the actual content. I think it's really good for your first submission. The subtitles were predictable. When you show a still shot, try to make the next shot (of the sequence of shots) more different than the previous shots. Give feedback on my shit, if you've got any time.

[stamper.....]

he is alive, but where? east coast florida?

pretty funny. i just talked to him today!

[Ducktales: The Movie]

kinda funny.

I liked the voice you used for the nephews and for Glomgold. They have a real funny quality to them. And the "Don't play again" button. I haven't seen one of those around, until now. Hey, I thought I made a ducktales cartoon.

[Gr00vy]

its coooool.

what a great sloth_clock! a cartoon that suggests: take it easy. no need to rush. calm down. buy some marijuana. smoke it.

[Edbert and Otis ep. 1-5]

something about this

There is something different about the way that this cartoon was made. I like the style of it. The clever use of sound with subtitles. The motion of the characters was interesting too. There is quality here. I am going to check out your other stuff!

[We Are The Rock Episode 2]

alright.

We Are The Rock Ep. 2 is kinda funny, and original. The voice over acting is done well. The animation is relatively simple. There's some nostalgia with Johnny 5. BUT the music was not credited!

[Goof Troop Kombat 1-VGDC]

fight scenes

Fight scenes are always hard to shoot in a long shot. And they are sometimes difficult to carry out. I saw some trouble with Steven Grabowski. Sound effects just add to the difficulty.

[Goonies: Introduction]

not terrible.

the drawing was adequate to understand the story. cindy lauper kicks butt. the bike could use some work. you have a good choice in shot selection in different parts of the cartoon.

[FDA - ASSWARP]

FDA Grrrrreeeeaaat!

It's tough for me to put a review for this into words. It's so inspiring. Lots of editing, and long nights working. And those sacrifices.

I can't hold back the sweets for the next FDA, especially ChocoLick, with the Oompas.

[Radiohead - Idioteque]

kinda cool

I really liked this. It has an Avant Garde style to it. Not really narrative, but random things that don't have a commonly understood relationship. Humans, as they would, try to make sense of it all.

I wish you would finish it though, find a way, because then it might be a part of the Radiohead Collection: http://www.newgrounds.com/coll ections/radiohead.html.

I like Radiohead too: http://www.newgrounds.com/port al/view.php?id=53987 .