JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Penguins]

funny fun fun

funny ending! great voices. it was a good laugh. and your graphics are drawn out, they aren't stolen!

[Kupa's Comics: Reparation]

short and interesting.

Interesting little cartoon. Great work on lip-syncing and movement. Short enough to watch a 2nd time, so I did.

[Bowser's Traning Tape 1]

fix the errors and = randy.

Once you fix your spelling errors, you'll be equal with Randy Solem's work! Also, great way of playing on the evil end of the story.

[Valentine's Day Special]

nice twist

nice twist david. see ya on the frontpage man!

[Bionic Commando (VGDC)]

Short and stupid.

It was short with stupid humor. Although stupid humor can be great, this needed something else. It was 1 joke! The voice acting was the best part of this short. Maybe one day you can start to draw your own cartoons too, but originality isn't your thing.

[Metroid: Rogue Formula]

nice work.

It's cool that you use Goldwave. I've been using that program since 1997 I think. It's one of the greatest sound programs that I have ever used. I was hoping for a short resolution following the last death. Something that would tell me that everything was alright within the story. Good use of sound!

cap123 responds:

thanks, it's nice to get a postive review from an accomplished flash artist ;)

Goldwave > all

[Unfinished Business]

Nicely done.

Cool to watch. Nice frame by frame. A fitting music to the visuals.

[the random theory]

interesting

Nice little cartoon you got here. I wouldn't say that this was completely random. Some of the images synced with the sound, so I could almost expect something else to sync.

[Fatal Feces]

good job

This could quite possibly top my new poop cartoon series. It's Destination Mouth. Good job man! A plunger, the ultimate weapon for poop.

[CI: Unregulated]

Great visuals, but lacking story.

The graphics and animation were of great quality, but the story was given to us in text. I wanted to see a reason why they are fighting, instead of reading it. I think it needed more human faces, or someone actually trying to care at what they were dying for. If you made a short scene of a few pilots talking about what their goal was and what was at risk, it might improve the story of this cartoon. The graphics kept me watching though, but special effects don't make stories great.