JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Koopa's Collapse]

kinda funny

I thought it was kind of funny. The main thing you should work on, in your ongoing flash work, is keeping it interesting. I've got a problem with that too. I love to make shit, but sometimes that gets ahead of the actual content. I think it's really good for your first submission. The subtitles were predictable. When you show a still shot, try to make the next shot (of the sequence of shots) more different than the previous shots. Give feedback on my shit, if you've got any time.

[Ducktales: The Movie]

kinda funny.

I liked the voice you used for the nephews and for Glomgold. They have a real funny quality to them. And the "Don't play again" button. I haven't seen one of those around, until now. Hey, I thought I made a ducktales cartoon.

[Edbert and Otis ep. 1-5]

something about this

There is something different about the way that this cartoon was made. I like the style of it. The clever use of sound with subtitles. The motion of the characters was interesting too. There is quality here. I am going to check out your other stuff!

[We Are The Rock Episode 2]

alright.

We Are The Rock Ep. 2 is kinda funny, and original. The voice over acting is done well. The animation is relatively simple. There's some nostalgia with Johnny 5. BUT the music was not credited!

[Goof Troop Kombat 1-VGDC]

fight scenes

Fight scenes are always hard to shoot in a long shot. And they are sometimes difficult to carry out. I saw some trouble with Steven Grabowski. Sound effects just add to the difficulty.

[I Like Chinese]

I didn't like it

The drawings needed work, and it needed an overall boost to it. It seemed as if you had an idea and slapped it together roughly. The sound had quality, but the visuals did not meet up with it.