JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Exodus Tyson Punched Out]

but...

not enough dick sucking at the end!

[I Like Chinese!]

yes

hilarious! going on favorites. now who really did this?

[Prostitute Mickey 2]

going in favorites!

amazing art style, i love it. also, it got really funny as it progressed. good use of lighting!

[Part of lightsaberfigh2]

good choice camera work

Contrary to a previous post, I thought the shaky camera added to the action. Most action movies have moving cameras during battles and close up shots to heighten the intensity of the scene. Worse thing you can do is go wide and static on a fist fight. It also would show the poor contact made between stunmen. I guess everything is relative, but in most cases that would not be advised.

[Alien & Bunny]

enjoyable

A buddy cartoon! Maybe Bunny can visit Alien on his planet, of course, once he gets a new ship. Alien helped Bunny with his dog problems, but now how is Bunny going to help Alien?

[Constant struggle]

enjoyed watching it!

I'm not sure about the title. It was a struggle for the man, but his struggle reached an end. His was not constant. I guess the constant struggle was for the entire group of people there, but we never met the other people. Could the struggle be for the bird? Constantly struggling to land somewhere without getting shot down? Interesting. I enjoyed the land reveal, after questioning the actions with the weights.

['Wet Floor']

my thoughts

I think you could have made it funnier if you timed it out shorter. This animation was short to begin with, and it kinda dragged. You could have made it 10 seconds long, or less. Play out that he is going to walk on the floor, cuz the audience already knows whats going to happen, you have it in the title. His foot inches closer to the floor. We know he will slip. Play it out nice and slow at the beginning, and then a quick slip, toaster, window, death, all really fast. Give the audience what they expect, but have them wait for it. Absence of sound effects and the slow fall at the end, it takes away from the experience, but I liked the plug coming from the outlet in sync with the music. Overall, I just kinda watched it and looked at the animation value of it, which was great. You probably had good reason for no sound effects.

rilstix responds:

Thanks for the critique Jeremy, I appreciate it.

[BEEBO Part 10]

getting back on it

So detailed are the carpets and backgrounds. A very dity episode however! Any spin-off characters for another cartoon series?

fabulous999 responds:

Perhaps the Mrs. Bon Jovi Show?

[Overtime - Jatkoaika]

spoiler...honest review

Sounds were amazing! So much detail in the sounds of things moving in the screen. I thought the music selection was hilarious, the ending song sounds so happy and "everything is at balance again" mood, but the family dog is eating the dead girl's remains. It felt a little long, the story could probably be told without the rollercoaster scene, I couldn't find how it added to the story. Very well done.

[Gorin]

let it flow

Good work! let the creative juices flow...very absurd!