JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Burnt Face Man 4]

F.U.N. spells...

Fun story! I think your BFM series is turning out very well. It's a real kick ass hot summer action-packed sensational HIT!

[S.A.M.V. 5]

good writing, good characters

I enjoyed the writing and the character design/voices. It's difficult to entertain someone that long. But it worked! I want to know what happens at their job and how each character will react when they get there.

BaconMask responds:

Well, I'm glad I held your attention for the durration of the movie! There are going to be a lot of weird, nutty things that happen in the next two parts... can't discuss them at the moment, but you'll NOT be disapointed! Thanks!

[Tommy's 1st day at school]

graphics strongest feature

At first I thought I had my winamp open or some other website, but found out that the music was coming from this flash cartoon, THAT'S HOW LITTLE IT FIT!

Speed up the movement and the editing and you could cut it in half and spare room for a story!

A boy goes to school with his matchbook and ends up burning down the school. You could make it more interesting, maybe he wants to burn it down, but things get in his way, or maybe he doesn't want to burn it down and something/someone forces him to.

You have a nice visual style, need to animate better though. Or make the style so you don't have to animate at all, but with the way it is now, it's SCREAMING "poorly animated!"

[Everyone has AIDS]

why

I really want to know why you thanked ABS? That guy steals my cartoons.

cpductions responds:

All content on his site is submitted through the forums. He doesn't go out in search of flash, he's too damn lazy to do that. ;)

[Nutsy & Klutsy: Ep. 2]

sound problems

Great job! The only thing holding you back is the sound quality. Since you do the vocals yourself, I'd suggest investing in a better microphone or sound card. I know some of it has to do with compression to meet the 5MB Newgrounds restriction, but some of the dialogue wasn't very clear. That aside, I'm voting 5 and recommending to a friend!

[Where do clams come from]

sweet

Cool cartoon. It speaks for itself, no need for dialogue, great animation, cool concept. Thanks for offering it to the public for free!

fellow animator.

[Inflatable Dad]

caught off guard

Haha! The abrupt positive message at the end caught me off guard.