I'm sending out an SOS
I only laughed at the sheep as a pillow part. But it was slightly enjoyable. I guess I just wanted more from it, like a story or something to link it all together. The audio breaks were okay because it felt like flipping through a radio station in the 80s, which is fine. Way too long of a shot at the beginning (the first guy singing), break it up man! Get a closer shot when he jumps on the bed. It might be more sentimental if you visually include more crap that the 80s produced.