JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fred's Birthday Surprise]

great work

I liked it. Great voice acting. Great animation. She sure got a way with getting him to shut up about his birthday. Hopefully it will transfer to DVD without too many problems for you. You could bring those characters back for more fun at the old folks home.

Topdrawer responds:

Thanks, Jeremy
Iv'e been enjoying your work too. I've noticed that people who produce good work are often the ones who offer constructive and helpful reviews.

[King Hippo's Punch Out]

funny

It's fuckin' funny. I laughed good at the end. Good job man. For what it is, it works. What the hell does King Hippo do to knock them down, we only see his fat back. Great ending too.

[Mutant Ninja Turtles EP03]

honest critique

Awesome animation, awesome graphics. Shedder's Scientist's audio was badly mixed, couldn't hear anything from him. The dialogue acting was hit or miss, especially with Donatello. I couldn't read the credits when they scrolled to the sun. (Awesome setting sun) The menu graphic of Leonardo was the most amazing thing I have ever seen drawn with Flash. Some of the action scenes seemed like they could use more action sounds (feet landing, louder punches, hits) and music to heighten the experience. Funny bonus extra, a good laugh!

[Whats on TV? 3]

I am this flash cartoon's saviour

"You're the saviour! You are one of a number of people who have helped keep this entry in the Portal!" This is the first time I've saved a cartoon and got to see the animation. Sweet stuff!

It was a funny cartoon. You got some cool voice actors too, and one I could NOT understand. Keep the connections alive!

DarkArchon responds:

Thanks Jeremy, you're one of the best animators that is active on Newgrounds. (meaning that you participate in things other than submissions)

I'm actually working on an update to this with voice acting from Mister William Stamper.

Combo meal has always been one of my favourite movies, and you're Reading Rainbow series is hands down awesome.

You're game about Bill cosby actually inspired me and a friend to make a game about Michael Jackson, but I doubt that will ever see the light of day.

Thanks again, Best of luck to you.

[Blood on the motorway]

pope clock looks back on better times.

I wasn't sure about the story. I think several clocks were meeting the end of their life. I saw a lock in there, and he was fighting the most famous clock of all. The lock was killed, looked like Strawberry Clock didn't want to do it. Is this the clock flash that illustrates the end of the clock era, as the pope clock opens the box and looks back on better times?

[Frogbag Clock is Jesus?]

surely you can't mean everything?

Everything goes in the FrogBag. Cosby, Urkel, Joey Gladstone, everything! This is one of my favorite clocks, so original and drawn very well.

Munglai responds:

Everything.

You don't have ears.

[meow mix gets pwnd]

that mr t

That Mr. T, always trying to chase Meow Mix cats down. Happy Clock Day!

TangClock responds:

I know! what a bully! Happy Clockday to you too! Thanks for the review!

[!!!jump Around!!! Iv]

minimal work, maximum impact!

Congrats on the minimal work for maximum result. I am all for that! Keep truckin! What cartoon was this anyway, Bill and Ted?

[The Ma$sAcre]

Great, but not Amazing...

What some of the reviewers are trying to say is that it's just fighting. And fighting without purpose or meaning feels empty. Even in Fight Club they had a purpose. The animation was great, the graphics, the loose control of the camera at the beginning was awesome.

It feels incomplete because it's not a story, it's the scene we see after the two characters can't resolve their differences and then decide to battle it out. It's a great scene. You could do something with the two human kids, since the shots go back to them a few times. Make a story between them. However this might be counter-productive since your style shows multiple fights, multiple characters, and multiple locations.

It was entertaining to watch, but became too long at about midpoint. Good luck with future projects! And great job to the animators!

[Salad Fingers Episode 6]

split him

I feel like I always split myself after the adventures with my toilet too. You are a cartoon making machine!