JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Salad Fingers Episode 9]

This is it

A revisiting of an old friend, an unwelcomed black spawn, the great war. Hope this isn't it, but I fear you grow tired of regular. Salad left his mark, blackening our vision with the seed of new.

[Candy Time]

great conflict

Nice original story, what a dilemma that character had! Sometimes it's hard to write conflict in a short story, but this was very clear. Liked how it was B&W, kept it dramatic.

[C.R.U.D.E. Metal Ep1 pt1]

I liked watching it.

Harry Potter meets steampunk, nice mix. I liked all of the movement, that takes a lot of time. I agree with another reviewer, the sideways walking while they move forward..draws attention to itself. That was the only technical issue I had. I liked the colors and character looks. VO was fine. The story left me a bit out of it, as if I missed an episode. Didn't understand the portal flashbacking, or if the characters knew about it. Nice hook at the end. Keep workin' hard!

[Neat Old Stuff]

all sassy-like.

There is one frame that I had to pause on. Gramps has his leg strut out all sassy-like. How long did that cotton gin take to draw!?

[LIFE + DEATH]

Poetry that moves lightning fast.

Like life, before you know it, it's over. I'd have to play this at half speed to enjoy all of it, but like life, you don't get to do that.

[Saved by the Horn]

Satchimo Jones got played

There go them Lisa Turtle pants, so much detail. Did Mr. B wink at me? This is the greatest saved by the bell parody animation movie online. You are drawing better these days. Did someone get a cool ass drawing tablet?

[Circle n' Square 2]

that's right

quality content at an affordable download! Best deal in town in this recession!

[A Robo Western]

Great visual

Since the visual and audible experience was amazing, I had no issues there. The voice acting was great, the sound effects top notch. The writing of the story was a little bumpy. Most of writing a story is a process of revealing information. I liked how you chose to not reveal the item that was passed down until the end. Maybe that item could be better related to the story, or made more clear if it was related. Maybe something related to One Eye's past. Since the story was engaging up until the end, it was a little let down, but that's a compliment to the rest of it, which was together.

[Phillip's Song]

two things

We got two things going for us today, our flash cartoons with purple creatures and random endings. I give you a good score and wish you well on your future submissions! Give the bearded men a chance...

[Eleanor Rigby's story]

good effort

Hilarious. Some parts were so literal that I had to laugh. Best shot was the shot of the moon, hold on to that one! A 7 for good effort, lots of drawn shots, keeps you watching.