JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tough Love Ina]

dialogue.

Pretty cool overall, but could have worked better without dialogue and a better shot of the cane at the end. Voice came out of nowhere and I was already used to having it without dialogue. Maybe she could walk right by him with her cane.

[Todd & Dan - Nozzle Pipe]

voice acting amusing

OMG spoilers: I thought the way the two characters interacted was amusing. I knew someone was going to mention that she was probably going to use it for a pipe. good job. There's something about the voice acting that I like.

[Charlie the Unicorn]

entertained me

Great stuff. I also enjoyed The Last Unicorn. Good inspiration right here people!

[Self Gratification]

it was entertaining

Nice little short. It was funny, I laughed. A harmless little cartoon in the end. I was expecting something far worse. Good editing too, I'd rate that, but there is no rating for that yet.

[Flat Beat]

my review

brainface, awesome job. Cool idea to build things as the song progressed. Pretty risky of you to hold a static shot on them without cutting. More changes in the song might need to occur for better replay value. Good choice in song too!

brainface responds:

yeah, I probably could have put more effort into this. I just wanted to see what I could do with only a few MCs on stage and just a whole bunch of tweening and tinting.

[eBaums world dot com]

we don't need no ebaum, let the mother fucker burn

Cool song, great production value on it. The graphics are alright. Without knowing what it stands for it's still good. Knowing that it opposes ebaum...well..here's what I have to say:

That mother fucker stole from me too. Same with Albino Black Sheep. Content Stealers make more money than I make from my own damn cartoons collectively. I'll drop names:

GorrillaMask (dot net), Flashring, Albino Blacksheep, Ebaumsworld, idleriot, jokaroo, muchosucko, myblam, and a few others. All have stolen content, without asking, each with advertising.

I kinda know how angry you got and how it inspired and motivated you to make this. Cheers that ebaums is down for today! May all of those websites BURN for stealing my shit. Props to flashplayer for their legit system. Keep up the good work. 5/5.

[WadeFulp: Internet Badass]

my review

Funny voice acting! Next time you record the voices, make sure to avoid that unwanted noise in the background, who knows what it was. Cool graphics! Nice choice in music. Nice quick editing to keep the pace going.

f0d responds:

Wow, you sir are one of my role models in flash animation. I love your work.

Thanks for the suggestions! The noise in the background was inserted. Birds chirping to make it sound like it was outdoors... hehehe I couldn't find any really good sound clips. Anyways, yeah I do need to spend a little time adjusting the audio levels next time.

Thanks for the review man! :)

[Revenge Of Abe Lincoln]

funny

It was pretty funny. I didn't know what to expect next. Some of the editing could have been even faster than it was. Good job!

boinky33 responds:

Thank you.

[Ingus: Halloween]

question for you at end of review

Cool cartoon! I liked how the dialogue was going off topic to topic. The audio quality could have been better, the voice acting was alright, not bad. Accents were appropriate. Graphics were great, as usual!

I don't know why Flash 8 is required, what did this have in it that requires flash 8 to make it, rather than an older version? Blurry effects?

KupaMan responds:

If you don't have Flash Player 8, Fredula will not show up at all. I'm not entirely sure why. I made about 50% of it in MX 2004, then finished it off in 8 when I got it. I actually didn't learn about blurry effects until afterwards. It would have saved on some problems that I had with the background. I had to replace the background with an image because I composed it of like 15 layers of soften fills. Had I done the blur effect, I would have probably saved a chunk of time.

Anyway, yeah; Fredula doesn't show up. I'm not sure why. I just know that you need Flash Player 8 to see him.

[Roger Barr meets Tom Fulp]

the bar would be coming home

Fun stuff! If I owned a bar, I wouldn't be coming home from it, it would be coming home from me. (?) I liked the high demand for that link slot in your cartoon. Great faces. We have to know when PICO came out!!