JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-CONFLICT-]

good start

Better than my firsts. And you gotta start somewhere. Good lip sync, I didn't get that down until much later on. Well drawn! The pacing was incredibly slow, and the voice-acting could be better, but these are things you pick up later on. This was 6 years ago from what you do now. Hunger was more well produced.

[HUNGER]

Nice job overall

Be careful who you love, they just might screw you over! Good job on a clear story of hunger, without using dialogue. That's an obstacle you managed to overcome, which makes it more universal. I liked the texture you applied, maybe lock it to certain objects so that multiple things would feel different if you could reach out and touch them. Maybe the branches are rough, and the bats are hairy. Your sounds gave a lighthearted feel that matched with your story. I was amused at how he poked the bat as he tripped.

[Mario's Recital]

thumbs up!

Can't lose with the Wilhelm!

[Sketchy Friends Dance 2]

smooooth

I am amused by the robot's quick-step. Good job! Very smooth, nice work. I've watched it for 5 minutes now.

TheBoogley responds:

between Burger Cheater, that zombie fashion tshirt and other videos of yours you have entertained me for hours, I'm glad to amuse you for a few minutes in return :D

[Rocking XC]

it's all in the face

I was amused by the nostril. Nice facial wear that progressed as the song was nearing its end. I was looking at his face most of the time. I think it needed a touch of something at the end, maybe he faints or flexes his muscles, something to show how he feels about playing the song, because it does seem like he put a lot of himself into it. Just some after-thoughts.

skylinegodzilla responds:

Yeah thanks :)
This shows that i did get that part of the message across
I recon it would of been good to make him faint in the end but this is done now. I will keep it in mined though

[The Pigpen]

Well made.

A story of sacrifice, to addiction, to murder. And to use pigs as the addicts and the deceased. Good stuff. The man's bib is too clean, it could be stained with the meat of hundreds, or show the constant bleaching of it. I like the color tones, and all of the sounds that kept my ear. This cartoon is very political, and well made. That business is murder.

[The "Change" of Christmas]

nice

Way to tell a story without dialogue, that's challenging. Good title too. Sorry about your Wacom, give them another chance, I've had one for 10 years and it's still in working condition.

NeroGeist responds:

Yea it was mostly my fault I broke the pen lol, I accendentally threw it at my computer lol. I also got a replacement yaay!

[Lima Bean]

hilarious

Why did it take me so long to find this good stuff! That poor Lima Bean.

[Comme un Poisson]

stamnpy?

hilarious woman's voice. keep it around. both grandma and puppetgirl.

[Gunny Bears]

mmm food!

I liked your use of fire and gunfire. Good imagination there. And after we believed all of it, you pulled out and showed us that they're still just candy, to be eaten. I hope this promotes more ways to tell a story with Flash.