JeremyLokken's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sketchy Friends Dance 2]

smooooth

I am amused by the robot's quick-step. Good job! Very smooth, nice work. I've watched it for 5 minutes now.

TheBoogley responds:

between Burger Cheater, that zombie fashion tshirt and other videos of yours you have entertained me for hours, I'm glad to amuse you for a few minutes in return :D

[Rocking XC]

it's all in the face

I was amused by the nostril. Nice facial wear that progressed as the song was nearing its end. I was looking at his face most of the time. I think it needed a touch of something at the end, maybe he faints or flexes his muscles, something to show how he feels about playing the song, because it does seem like he put a lot of himself into it. Just some after-thoughts.

skylinegodzilla responds:

Yeah thanks :)
This shows that i did get that part of the message across
I recon it would of been good to make him faint in the end but this is done now. I will keep it in mined though

[The "Change" of Christmas]

nice

Way to tell a story without dialogue, that's challenging. Good title too. Sorry about your Wacom, give them another chance, I've had one for 10 years and it's still in working condition.

NeroGeist responds:

Yea it was mostly my fault I broke the pen lol, I accendentally threw it at my computer lol. I also got a replacement yaay!

['Wet Floor']

my thoughts

I think you could have made it funnier if you timed it out shorter. This animation was short to begin with, and it kinda dragged. You could have made it 10 seconds long, or less. Play out that he is going to walk on the floor, cuz the audience already knows whats going to happen, you have it in the title. His foot inches closer to the floor. We know he will slip. Play it out nice and slow at the beginning, and then a quick slip, toaster, window, death, all really fast. Give the audience what they expect, but have them wait for it. Absence of sound effects and the slow fall at the end, it takes away from the experience, but I liked the plug coming from the outlet in sync with the music. Overall, I just kinda watched it and looked at the animation value of it, which was great. You probably had good reason for no sound effects.

rilstix responds:

Thanks for the critique Jeremy, I appreciate it.

[BEEBO Part 10]

getting back on it

So detailed are the carpets and backgrounds. A very dity episode however! Any spin-off characters for another cartoon series?

fabulous999 responds:

Perhaps the Mrs. Bon Jovi Show?

[Hotgod Shorts]

good show!

fun stuff, lots of hard work, should have been ranked higher on the daily. i tend to hate mario animations.

PiGPEN responds:

Thanks.

(ps. Ugly Duck would be perfect if it had more boobies.)

[Ingus: Episode 7]

entertaining at a quality level.

great stuff man! I was getting some weird audio clips between lines of dialogue though. Amazing graphics. Great voice-acting. Hilarious writing.

KupaMan responds:

Thanks. I had some audio problems with this one probably more than the past ones. I could only hear maybe one or two on my computer, but I just checked it out on my friend's laptop and I can hear an odd transition. I figure I know how to fix it for the future. I hope it never happens again.

[Flat Beat]

my review

brainface, awesome job. Cool idea to build things as the song progressed. Pretty risky of you to hold a static shot on them without cutting. More changes in the song might need to occur for better replay value. Good choice in song too!

brainface responds:

yeah, I probably could have put more effort into this. I just wanted to see what I could do with only a few MCs on stage and just a whole bunch of tweening and tinting.

[WadeFulp: Internet Badass]

my review

Funny voice acting! Next time you record the voices, make sure to avoid that unwanted noise in the background, who knows what it was. Cool graphics! Nice choice in music. Nice quick editing to keep the pace going.

f0d responds:

Wow, you sir are one of my role models in flash animation. I love your work.

Thanks for the suggestions! The noise in the background was inserted. Birds chirping to make it sound like it was outdoors... hehehe I couldn't find any really good sound clips. Anyways, yeah I do need to spend a little time adjusting the audio levels next time.

Thanks for the review man! :)

[Revenge Of Abe Lincoln]

funny

It was pretty funny. I didn't know what to expect next. Some of the editing could have been even faster than it was. Good job!

boinky33 responds:

Thank you.