Score: 7

"my thoughts"

submission: 'Wet Floor'

date: December 8, 2007

I think you could have made it funnier if you timed it out shorter. This animation was short to begin with, and it kinda dragged. You could have made it 10 seconds long, or less. Play out that he is going to walk on the floor, cuz the audience already knows whats going to happen, you have it in the title. His foot inches closer to the floor. We know he will slip. Play it out nice and slow at the beginning, and then a quick slip, toaster, window, death, all really fast. Give the audience what they expect, but have them wait for it. Absence of sound effects and the slow fall at the end, it takes away from the experience, but I liked the plug coming from the outlet in sync with the music. Overall, I just kinda watched it and looked at the animation value of it, which was great. You probably had good reason for no sound effects.

Score: 10

"getting back on it"

submission: BEEBO Part 10

date: November 17, 2007

So detailed are the carpets and backgrounds. A very dity episode however! Any spin-off characters for another cartoon series?

Score: 9

"sweet"

submission: He Stole my Wallet

date: June 10, 2007

I liked it! The montage was great, they were dancing together. The policeman's voice was unique, he could be used for another character maybe or have him come back in another cartoon. Good work!

Score: 10

"he sure was hungry"

submission: Dave the Hungry Dinosaur

date: May 25, 2007

This is why we need female initiative, without it, all the males would eat each other and no one would be left.

Score: 10

"good show!"

submission: Hotgod Shorts

date: August 7, 2006

fun stuff, lots of hard work, should have been ranked higher on the daily. i tend to hate mario animations.

Score: 6

"Good luck to Gizmo"

submission: In Memory of Gizmo

date: August 5, 2006

May he find the buried treasure that cannot be found among the living.

Score: 10

"entertaining at a quality level."

submission: Ingus: Episode 7

date: July 16, 2006

great stuff man! I was getting some weird audio clips between lines of dialogue though. Amazing graphics. Great voice-acting. Hilarious writing.

Score: 8

"my review"

submission: Flat Beat

date: November 10, 2005

brainface, awesome job. Cool idea to build things as the song progressed. Pretty risky of you to hold a static shot on them without cutting. More changes in the song might need to occur for better replay value. Good choice in song too!

Score: 8

"my review"

submission: WadeFulp: Internet Badass

date: November 4, 2005

Funny voice acting! Next time you record the voices, make sure to avoid that unwanted noise in the background, who knows what it was. Cool graphics! Nice choice in music. Nice quick editing to keep the pace going.

Score: 8

"funny"

submission: Revenge Of Abe Lincoln

date: November 2, 2005

It was pretty funny. I didn't know what to expect next. Some of the editing could have been even faster than it was. Good job!