Score: 10

"reviewing it on trailer value"

submission: Demise of Matsumoto

date: June 26, 2005

Cool trailer. I liked the intercut credit titles between the graphics. It fit well with the music. You kept the trailer just subtle enough to not give too much away and leave us with curiousity. It might work as a teaser in that regard. I don't know how these things work :)

Score: 10

"insane!"

submission: Mexican PinkVisor CarRide

date: June 26, 2005

that was insane! i'm scared to move to LA!

Score: 10

"good writing, good characters"

submission: S.A.M.V. 5

date: June 25, 2005

I enjoyed the writing and the character design/voices. It's difficult to entertain someone that long. But it worked! I want to know what happens at their job and how each character will react when they get there.

Score: 4

"graphics strongest feature"

submission: Tommy's 1st day at school

date: June 24, 2005

At first I thought I had my winamp open or some other website, but found out that the music was coming from this flash cartoon, THAT'S HOW LITTLE IT FIT!

Speed up the movement and the editing and you could cut it in half and spare room for a story!

A boy goes to school with his matchbook and ends up burning down the school. You could make it more interesting, maybe he wants to burn it down, but things get in his way, or maybe he doesn't want to burn it down and something/someone forces him to.

You have a nice visual style, need to animate better though. Or make the style so you don't have to animate at all, but with the way it is now, it's SCREAMING "poorly animated!"

Score: 3

"why"

submission: Everyone has AIDS

date: June 23, 2005

I really want to know why you thanked ABS? That guy steals my cartoons.

Score: 10

"sound problems"

submission: Nutsy & Klutsy: Ep. 2

date: June 22, 2005

Great job! The only thing holding you back is the sound quality. Since you do the vocals yourself, I'd suggest investing in a better microphone or sound card. I know some of it has to do with compression to meet the 5MB Newgrounds restriction, but some of the dialogue wasn't very clear. That aside, I'm voting 5 and recommending to a friend!

Score: 10

"sweet"

submission: Where do clams come from

date: June 22, 2005

Cool cartoon. It speaks for itself, no need for dialogue, great animation, cool concept. Thanks for offering it to the public for free!

fellow animator.

Score: 6

"caught off guard"

submission: Inflatable Dad

date: June 20, 2005

Haha! The abrupt positive message at the end caught me off guard.

Score: 8

"woke me up"

submission: Save Me from the Dark

date: June 18, 2005

Sometimes we just need someone to wake us up. I liked how you told the story without even saying a word. The mind control idea was cool, I found it funny that the buttons were spelling out the lyrics at the same time they were being sung. Those spaceships look radical! The song fit with most of what was on screen, so good job with that too!

Score: 7

"amongst the ..."

submission: Creation by Turtle

date: June 17, 2005

Where does Turtle go after the planet is furtile? Into space and amongst the stars! Interesting little cartoon. Thanks for making it!