Score: 8

"a little slow, or just too short."

submission: Martha's Revenge

date: August 28, 2005

I think the story moved a little too slow for me. It's pretty much one event: She gets out of jail. But we get some dialogue that she wants to start a plan for revenge in the helicopter shot. Great graphics, good animation, nice choice of shots. I thought we started on Martha, that she had become that fowl, but it was kind of funny to see her later, playing on my low expectations of her. Looking forward to the next episode.

Score: 7

"national treasure?"

submission: Mario's Jump In 2 (HR)

date: August 23, 2005

Hey, it ended just like Marc's James Earl Jones cartoon, where a guy is going to break through a window to escape, but the movie is put on pause. Good use of music at the end, was that the National Treasure Soundtrack?

Score: 9

"great work"

submission: Fred's Birthday Surprise

date: August 21, 2005

I liked it. Great voice acting. Great animation. She sure got a way with getting him to shut up about his birthday. Hopefully it will transfer to DVD without too many problems for you. You could bring those characters back for more fun at the old folks home.

Score: 8

"funny"

submission: King Hippo's Punch Out

date: August 20, 2005

It's fuckin' funny. I laughed good at the end. Good job man. For what it is, it works. What the hell does King Hippo do to knock them down, we only see his fat back. Great ending too.

Score: 9

"honest critique"

submission: Mutant Ninja Turtles EP03

date: August 17, 2005

Awesome animation, awesome graphics. Shedder's Scientist's audio was badly mixed, couldn't hear anything from him. The dialogue acting was hit or miss, especially with Donatello. I couldn't read the credits when they scrolled to the sun. (Awesome setting sun) The menu graphic of Leonardo was the most amazing thing I have ever seen drawn with Flash. Some of the action scenes seemed like they could use more action sounds (feet landing, louder punches, hits) and music to heighten the experience. Funny bonus extra, a good laugh!

Score: 7

"I am this flash cartoon's saviour"

submission: Whats on TV? 3

date: August 15, 2005

"You're the saviour! You are one of a number of people who have helped keep this entry in the Portal!" This is the first time I've saved a cartoon and got to see the animation. Sweet stuff!

It was a funny cartoon. You got some cool voice actors too, and one I could NOT understand. Keep the connections alive!

Score: 9

"pope clock looks back on better times."

submission: Blood on the motorway

date: August 15, 2005

I wasn't sure about the story. I think several clocks were meeting the end of their life. I saw a lock in there, and he was fighting the most famous clock of all. The lock was killed, looked like Strawberry Clock didn't want to do it. Is this the clock flash that illustrates the end of the clock era, as the pope clock opens the box and looks back on better times?

Score: 9

"surely you can't mean everything?"

submission: Frogbag Clock is Jesus?

date: August 15, 2005

Everything goes in the FrogBag. Cosby, Urkel, Joey Gladstone, everything! This is one of my favorite clocks, so original and drawn very well.

Score: 3

"that mr t"

submission: meow mix gets pwnd

date: August 15, 2005

That Mr. T, always trying to chase Meow Mix cats down. Happy Clock Day!

Score: 10

"minimal work, maximum impact!"

submission: !!!jump Around!!! Iv

date: August 7, 2005

Congrats on the minimal work for maximum result. I am all for that! Keep truckin! What cartoon was this anyway, Bill and Ted?