Score: 9

"enjoyed watching it!"

submission: Constant struggle

date: December 20, 2007

I'm not sure about the title. It was a struggle for the man, but his struggle reached an end. His was not constant. I guess the constant struggle was for the entire group of people there, but we never met the other people. Could the struggle be for the bird? Constantly struggling to land somewhere without getting shot down? Interesting. I enjoyed the land reveal, after questioning the actions with the weights.

Score: 7

"my thoughts"

submission: 'Wet Floor'

date: December 8, 2007

I think you could have made it funnier if you timed it out shorter. This animation was short to begin with, and it kinda dragged. You could have made it 10 seconds long, or less. Play out that he is going to walk on the floor, cuz the audience already knows whats going to happen, you have it in the title. His foot inches closer to the floor. We know he will slip. Play it out nice and slow at the beginning, and then a quick slip, toaster, window, death, all really fast. Give the audience what they expect, but have them wait for it. Absence of sound effects and the slow fall at the end, it takes away from the experience, but I liked the plug coming from the outlet in sync with the music. Overall, I just kinda watched it and looked at the animation value of it, which was great. You probably had good reason for no sound effects.

Score: 10

"getting back on it"

submission: BEEBO Part 10

date: November 17, 2007

So detailed are the carpets and backgrounds. A very dity episode however! Any spin-off characters for another cartoon series?

Score: 9

"spoiler...honest review"

submission: Overtime - Jatkoaika

date: October 19, 2007

Sounds were amazing! So much detail in the sounds of things moving in the screen. I thought the music selection was hilarious, the ending song sounds so happy and "everything is at balance again" mood, but the family dog is eating the dead girl's remains. It felt a little long, the story could probably be told without the rollercoaster scene, I couldn't find how it added to the story. Very well done.

Score: 9

"sweet"

submission: He Stole my Wallet

date: June 10, 2007

I liked it! The montage was great, they were dancing together. The policeman's voice was unique, he could be used for another character maybe or have him come back in another cartoon. Good work!

Score: 10

"let it flow"

submission: Gorin

date: June 7, 2007

Good work! let the creative juices flow...very absurd!

Score: 9

"this must have been a 90s game!"

submission: Ivan Drago!

date: January 1, 2007

Great interactivity, no problem with the controls, 16bit graphics and old school sounds took me back the early 90s, though it got kind of boring by the time I was fighting my second dinosaur. Loved the various health items and explosions. Wished there was a superpunch while kneeling. Enemy names were pretty funny.

Score: 9

"the magical hat"

submission: .snowy.

date: December 26, 2006

It was the magical hat that did it. Those poor kids. I liked the animation and drawing style. Interesting play with time.

Score: 8

"cool short"

submission: Oswald Finds A Home

date: December 6, 2006

Last line of dialogue was great. Didn't like the way the human character walked. Good work though, I voted well! Unexpected, not predictable.

Score: 10

"well done"

submission: Bird Skipper (Part 1)

date: August 10, 2006

That's good stuff. Great way of showing the emotion through exaggeration. The sound effects enhanced the parts where the excessive action was happening. I love the detailed cutaways, I'm a big fan of Ren and Stimpy (where I first noticed them). Good use of editing to cut with the song as we learn about this huge dog. The animation is fluid, I found myself watching it as it was playing, rather than critiquing it on the fly. I think that's hard to accomplish in the viewer.