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I'm not sure about the title. It was a struggle for the man, but his struggle reached an end. His was not constant. I guess the constant struggle was for the entire group of people there, but we never met the other people. Could the struggle be for the bird? Constantly struggling to land somewhere without getting shot down? Interesting. I enjoyed the land reveal, after questioning the actions with the weights.
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I think you could have made it funnier if you timed it out shorter. This animation was short to begin with, and it kinda dragged. You could have made it 10 seconds long, or less. Play out that he is going to walk on the floor, cuz the audience already knows whats going to happen, you have it in the title. His foot inches closer to the floor. We know he will slip. Play it out nice and slow at the beginning, and then a quick slip, toaster, window, death, all really fast. Give the audience what they expect, but have them wait for it. Absence of sound effects and the slow fall at the end, it takes away from the experience, but I liked the plug coming from the outlet in sync with the music. Overall, I just kinda watched it and looked at the animation value of it, which was great. You probably had good reason for no sound effects.
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Thanks for the critique Jeremy, I appreciate it.
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So detailed are the carpets and backgrounds. A very dity episode however! Any spin-off characters for another cartoon series?
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Perhaps the Mrs. Bon Jovi Show?
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Sounds were amazing! So much detail in the sounds of things moving in the screen. I thought the music selection was hilarious, the ending song sounds so happy and "everything is at balance again" mood, but the family dog is eating the dead girl's remains. It felt a little long, the story could probably be told without the rollercoaster scene, I couldn't find how it added to the story. Very well done.
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I liked it! The montage was great, they were dancing together. The policeman's voice was unique, he could be used for another character maybe or have him come back in another cartoon. Good work!
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I LOVE YOU SO MUCH JEREMY!
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Good work! let the creative juices flow...very absurd!
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This is why we need female initiative, without it, all the males would eat each other and no one would be left.
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HOLY SHIT! Dude, you are my inspiration man! If you never made flash I would have never have.
Thanks for everything :D Love you work! :)
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Great interactivity, no problem with the controls, 16bit graphics and old school sounds took me back the early 90s, though it got kind of boring by the time I was fighting my second dinosaur. Loved the various health items and explosions. Wished there was a superpunch while kneeling. Enemy names were pretty funny.
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It was the magical hat that did it. Those poor kids. I liked the animation and drawing style. Interesting play with time.
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Last line of dialogue was great. Didn't like the way the human character walked. Good work though, I voted well! Unexpected, not predictable.
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