Score: 9

"enjoyed watching it!"

submission: Constant struggle

date: December 20, 2007

I'm not sure about the title. It was a struggle for the man, but his struggle reached an end. His was not constant. I guess the constant struggle was for the entire group of people there, but we never met the other people. Could the struggle be for the bird? Constantly struggling to land somewhere without getting shot down? Interesting. I enjoyed the land reveal, after questioning the actions with the weights.

Score: 7

"my thoughts"

submission: 'Wet Floor'

date: December 8, 2007

I think you could have made it funnier if you timed it out shorter. This animation was short to begin with, and it kinda dragged. You could have made it 10 seconds long, or less. Play out that he is going to walk on the floor, cuz the audience already knows whats going to happen, you have it in the title. His foot inches closer to the floor. We know he will slip. Play it out nice and slow at the beginning, and then a quick slip, toaster, window, death, all really fast. Give the audience what they expect, but have them wait for it. Absence of sound effects and the slow fall at the end, it takes away from the experience, but I liked the plug coming from the outlet in sync with the music. Overall, I just kinda watched it and looked at the animation value of it, which was great. You probably had good reason for no sound effects.

Score: 10

"getting back on it"

submission: BEEBO Part 10

date: November 17, 2007

So detailed are the carpets and backgrounds. A very dity episode however! Any spin-off characters for another cartoon series?

Score: 10

"GOLD"

submission: 6 in a Row

date: June 28, 2005

It's the sequel song! If someone made a cartoon out of this, few NGers would like it! WHY! It would be gold.

Score: 10

"Triple the flavor"

submission: Triple Penetration

date: June 11, 2005

GOLD! Shit, I got this bitch the day before it came out.